de Daniela Reghina Onu
Voi pleca singură,
Fără mine,
Sluga mea cea credincioasă
De-o viaţă,
Pentru că numai eu
M – am însoţit
În drumul anevoios
Spre Eben-Ezer.
Voi pleca singură,
Fără mine,
Către Elyoenai.
Voi arde odată
Cu uleiul de măsline
Al Menorei,
Până la mistuirea
Flăcării albastre
Din al şaptelea braţ.
E-adevărat,
În timpul Jertfei de seară,
După atâta ardere-de-tot,
Despărţirea asta
Nu mai doare.
Până târziu,
Până departe,
Până la Manahat,
Voi ajunge
În sfârşit…
Singură,
Fără mine.
( Bucureşti , Martie – 2011; din volumul Paşi printre pietrele Sionului )
otnielabattzion - עותניאלה בת ציון 
”Fara mine” face parte din noi, pentru ca adeseori plecam la drum fara noi.Nu stim spre ce ne indreptam, asteptam Glasul Celui Pre a Inalt pentru a ne regasi sensul si fiinta deopotriva.Personal, ma regasesc in aceasta poezie, de multe ori am simtit ca plec la drum singura fara mine. Adevarul este unul singur, DUMNEZEU este intotdeauna langa noi, niciodata nu se desparte de noi, numai ca nu avem intotdeauna deschidere reala catre EL.Tarziu si departe vom ajunge poate singuri fara noi, dar umpluti cu DUHUL SFANT! ”
O poezie foarte sensibila, poate una dintre cele mai sensibile , citite de mine. Se simt ecourile din Ana Blandiana si Nichita Stanescu; mesianismul promovat de poeta este unicat.
Foarte, foarte…….foarte frumos. Astept si alte poezii de acest fel.
Foarte frumoasa si sensibila poezie. Ma regasesc in versurile ei… De multe ori am vrut sa abandonez o situatie ” fara mine .” Bine ca Domnul a fost cu mine.
Sa scrii cat mai multe poezii Daniela, chiar ai mult talent. Domnul sa te binecuvinteze !
Tony’s opinion about Daniela`s poems 😛 Poemul acesta e foarte sensibil,scris frumos.Mi-a placut.Sabat Salom=Sambata Pacii,Odhna,Meditare.Tony Daccre Barat
Dragi Prieteni – Shalom !
Ma bucur ca v-a placut poezia ” Fara mine .” Si poezia aceasta – cu un puternic accent mesianic – ca orice creatie de Frumos artistic, are o istorie a ei, pe care, in intelepciunea mea, nu cred ca este bine sa v-o dezvalui , pentru ca nu vreau sa fur cititorului placerea de-a se regasi pe sine in bogatia de sensuri a mesajului .
Asadar, sunt fericita ca ati receptat puternic aceaste versuri , si ca le considerati sensibile. Sa fiti cu totii binecuvantati si sa aveti parte, ca cititori adevarati, numai de o Poezie inalta, de calitate.
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