TOT

de Daniela Reghina Onu

Pentru tine nu – i mult,
Pentru mine e TOT
Ca pot sa fiu struna aceea
Incordata dar blanda ,
Dintr-o harfa ce mangaie norii,
Ce stau gata sa toarne
Ploaia tarzie peste pamantu-nsetat.
Pentru tine nu-i mult,
Pentru mine e TOT.

Pentru tine nu-i mult,
Pentru mine e TOT
Ca pot s-ating obrazul curat
Al cerului tau,
Ca atingerea mea
Iti va aprinde toate stelele ,
Una cate una,
In noaptea ta grea …
Pentru tine nu-i mult,
Pentru mine e TOT.

Pentru tine nu-i mult,
Pentru mine e TOT
Ca pot sa-ti mai vad o data chipul,
Sa-ti mai mangai o data pleoapele obosite
Cu degete aspre de tot lutul din mine,
Ca pot sa-ti mai soptesc,
Cu glasul meu omenesc : Te iubesc !
Pentru tine nu-i mult,
Pentru mine e TOT.

Pentru tine nu-i mult,
Pentru mine e TOT,
Pana cand sunetul Shofarului
Va zgudui Inaltul,
Si-atunci,  ceea ce-a fost,
Prea putin,
Sau prea mult,
Va fi TOT.

( Bucuresti , Iulie – 2011, din volumul Pasi  printre pietrele Sionului. )

38 de răspunsuri la TOT

  1. Elena Ionecu spune:

    Laitmotivul este ca DUMNEZEU este Totul pentru Dvs. si pentru noi!Suntem parte din EL,uneori simtim putin, insa pentru El reprezentem mult, nu putem costientiza in momentul fiintei noastre cine suntem si incotro ne indreptam.EL, ISUS, ne vrea pentru EL, pentru noi a murit si a Inviat, si asfel CUVANTUL LUI DUMNEZEU s-a implinit!
    Poeta, DANIELA ONU, face o incursiune in universul creatiei LUI DUMNEZEU, care reprezinta tot ce este mai important in aceasta lume.In imperfectiunea noastra, dorim sa-l atingem, dorim sa-i vorbim, dorim sa ne asculte ca odinioara.Pentru unii dintre noi, nu inseamna mult, insa pentru DUMNEZEU este nespus de mult, poeta ne face constienti, in mod real de acest fapt, prin dorinta intensa de A-L Simti ca parte din fiinta Sa.TOTUL reprezinta DUMNEZEU, IAR EL INSEAMNA FOARTE MULT, ABSOLUTUL!
    DOMNUL ISUS SA NE AJUTE PE FIECARE SA INTELEGEM CUM SE CUVINE INTENTIA PLINA DE HAR A POETEI, DANIELA ONU, CARE ARE O MISIUNE IMPORTANTA, IN ACEST COLT DE LUME.
    HAR SI PACE!

  2. Madi spune:

    Frumoasa si delicata poezie, Otniela ! Impletesti iubirea omeneasca cu Iubirea absoluta care este Dumnezeu, si din ai carui stropi gustam si noi putin cate putin in viata premergatoare vesniciei, pana cand vom gusta din plin Totul. Asta ma duce cu gandul la versetele din 1 Corinteni cap. 13 : 8 si 13. „Acum dar raman acestea trei: credinta, nadejdea si dragostea; dar cea mai mare dintre ele este dragostea”.
    Sa fi binecuvantata!

  3. Dana spune:

    SHALOM,
    TOT este El : EL ELION: EL SHADAY : ELOHIM : IOD HEY VAV HEY YESHUA HA MASHIAH: SE HA ELOHIM : YOD HEY VAV HEI RAFA …. TOT DE LA ALEF LA TAV SAU IN TRADUCERE DE LA ALFA LA OMEGA = TOT ESTE EL
    O POEZIE INCANTATOARE CARE TE INDEAMNA SA DESCOPERI CINE ESTE EL!
    FELICITARI DANIELA!
    BARUH HASHEM!

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  9. Friendly Regards for your sensitivity in writing poems. It s a superb poetry.

  10. Hey – I do like poems very much. This one is fantastic. I could add to my blog that automatically tweet my newest twitter updates Ive.

  11. K.R Schmelmer spune:

    Great post. Wonderful composition Otniella. I will subscribe to your poems.

  12. Kevin P. Totin spune:

    I love reading your blog because it has very interesting topics…and very interesting poems.This one is ” Everything ” is very well composed. I do like reading about the jewish people . I consider them the wonderful Israel of God.

  13. Patty Folkner spune:

    Hi i read your blog occasionally and i realize very quickly you make a very good work and i hope you have many readers as your site deserves. i am a , messianic jew for many years and i want to thanks my Hashem that gave me the opportunity to visit and to pray for Israel, my country . it s fortunatelly to meet you this site Otniella and i bless your wonferful target for the glory of our Saviour, who indeed was a jew. bless you with everything you need .your sister – Patty.

  14. Kerrie Perich spune:

    Definitely its a very good poem, its wonderful. I like very much your site dear Otniella , daughter of Israel. Bless you a lot in Christ Jesus.

  15. Kate Allender spune:

    Excellent beautuful expressed poem Otniella. Much grace in your feelings. ” Everything „….it s lovely ! Thanks for sharing it, with lots of embraces….Toda Rabbah !!!!!!

  16. Daniel Alexandru Galeriu spune:

    Minunate versuri … Extraordinar de frumos gandit, simtit si rostit. O poezie ADEVARATA !!

  17. Very beautiful poem Otniella. Never enough to think of what means ” everything ” for our life. Thanks for sharing such a beautiful poem with us. Praise the Lord !

  18. TOT | otnielabattzion. I was recommended this website by my friend Lisa who likes to read your blog . You are incredible! Thanks! Your poem TOT | otnielabattzion by Otniela – Daniela Onu is brilliant in its expression. Best Regards, Johnny Cassetta

  19. Hello There. I found your blog using google search. This is a really well written poetry. I’ll be sure to bookmark it and come back to read more and more of TOT | otnielabattzion made by Otniela – Daniela Onu. Very beaitiful poem. Thanks for the poetry post . I will definitely comeback.

  20. popok bayi spune:

    Superb poetry made by Otniela – Daniela Onu ! Wonderful ! Please keep it on doing the same.

  21. Thanks , dear friends : invest liberty reserve , hyip investment , Inspirational Quotes and popok bayi.
    I `m very glad you like my poem and found it beautiful. I `m also glad you came my site and read my articles. May God of Israel bless you with a great Shalom !

  22. Hanna - Louise spune:

    It s a very beautiful poem Otniella. Please, keep doing on. Hashem bless your gifted work !!!!! I m a messianic jew too.

  23. Erwin Miltz spune:

    TOT | otnielabattzion. Very very beautiful poem. I like reading poems and this one is gorgeous.
    You have a very beautiful site, Otniella. Much work , more reward. Adonai be with you at your every step. Mashiach is coming ! Shabbat Shalom !

  24. Reinhard Geibel spune:

    Schalom ! I m from Germany, from the evangelical church. congratulations foer your website. Must go on with your job !!!!!!!I love and pray for Israel people. Praise the Lord Yeshua Mesiah for His forgiveness in His cross!!!!
    This is a very beautiful poem and I m afraid my google translation is very pour. You ve a special gift from God Otniela – Daniela Onu.
    God bless you !!!!!

  25. Usually I do not read article on blogs, but I wish to say that this write-up very compelled me to take a look at and do it! Your writing poems has been amazed me. Thank you, very beautiful lines article. God bless you otnielabattzion !!!!!!!!

  26. Levitii spune:

    Incantator blog, incantatoare poezii. Adonay sa fie Umbra pe mana ta cea dreapta Otniela Bat Tzion. Binecuvantari din Sion va dorim si noi…

  27. Carla Plush spune:

    Schallom. Wow, fantastic blog layout! The overall look of your site is excellent, and the content is fantastic ! Thanks for your poem TOT | otnielabattzion. It s simply wonderful !!!! God bless you otnielabattzion. I m happy to find your site.

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